Another week of writing gone by. Lots of business as usual and one fairly momentous accomplishment.
Here are the details.
The first draft is done. The novel is an actual thing that exists somewhere other than my head. There’s still a lot of work to do before it’s fit to be read by other humans, but it’s damn nice to have the first draft in the can. Instead of telling you how much I wrote for the week, I’ll give you the final stats for the first draft:
The first draft ended up right about where I thought it would in terms of word count. For a horror novel, between 80,000 and 90,000 words is a solid length, and my guess is that my critique partners will get something around 85,000 words after my first pass. It took me a bit under four months to write the first draft, 111 days to be exact. That’s not too bad, especially since I took two weeks off in the middle to work on another project.
I outlined two more short stories last week, and put about 1,000 words into a first draft on one of them. I stalled out a bit because of another project I’m working on, but I should get back to short stories in the very near future.
A couple of submissions and a couple of rejections last week.
I sent out submissions #55 and #56 for the year. Still on pace to hit my goal of 100 for 2018 (and then some). I’ve got fourteen submissions pending, and four of those have been waiting over 100 days. I hope to hear back from at least one of them this week.
I have a game design project due next month, and I’ve been making good progress on it. Last week I put 8,000 words into it, and I’m close to a first draft. I’m well ahead of my deadline and feeling pretty good about what I’ve got so far.
Two blog posts last week. I’m gonna try for three again this week.
5/14/18: A Week of Writing: 5/7/18 to 5/13/18
Business as usual.
5/16/18: New Author Starter Kit – Submission Prep
In this post, I compiled a list of six things I think you should have ready to go before you send your first submission. If you’re new to the submission biz, give it a look. I’ll follow up this week with part two, Acceptance Prep.
The goals this week are to finish the first draft of my game design project and start the first pass on the first draft of the novel.
This week it’s another bit of flash I published with The Molotov Cocktail. This is one is called “Night Walk,” and it took second place in The Molotov’s FlashFuture contest a couple of years ago. It’s a slightly different spin on the undead apocalypse, and, fun fact, if/when I publish a collection of short fiction, Night Walk is one of the front runners for the title of said hypothetical collection.
That was my week. How was yours?
If you’re a new author and you want to submit your work to magazines, literary journals, anthologies, contests, and the like, it can seem a daunting process. I mean, where do you submit? How do you submit? A lot of us simply learned by doing, and, of course, experience is often the best teacher. That said, there’s no reason to go into the wilds of submission land completely unprepared.
So, based on my experience, here’s a list of six things you need before you throw your precious word baby on the mercy of the market.
1) Duotrope or The Submission Grinder. These two online market guides and submission trackers are, in my opinion, a must for any new author. Not only do they have a vast, searchable databases of potential markets, they also keep track of your submissions so you don’t have to worry about keeping a spreadsheet (though it’s not a terrible idea to do that anyway). Duotrope is a paid service (at $5.00 a month) and The Submission Grinder is free. There are other good databases out there, and you might track those down later, but Duotrope and The Submission Grinder are, in my opinion, the best places to start.
2) Separate submission email address. I think it’s a good idea to set up a separate email address for your submissions (and then use that email when you set up submission-related accounts like Submittable). This is a do as I say and not as I do kind of thing, as my own email is, uh, kind of a legacy thing that would take a while to explain. So why a separate email? Three reasons.
3) Submittable account. Not every publisher accepts submissions through email, and it’s becoming a lot more common for publishers to use submission management software. The most common is Submittable, and I would urge you to just set up an account right away. It’s free, and it’s one less thing you have to think about when you’re agonizing over which story to send to a publisher. There are a few other submission managers, but they either don’t require an author account or they’re not common enough yet to worry about right off the bat.
4) Shunn Standard Manuscript format. Most publishers are going to ask you to format your manuscript in something called standard or Shunn Standard Manuscript format (sometimes simply called standard manuscript format), and you should get familiar with it right away. In fact, if you know how to use MS Word, it wouldn’t be a terrible idea to set up a template so you don’t have to mess with all the formatting for every manuscript. Some publishers want slight variations of the format, most often with how things like italics are treated, but this is the most common format for short story submissions. In fact, if a publisher doesn’t mention manuscript format in their guidelines, I just send it in standard.
5) Cover Letter template. When you send a submission, you’ll need some kind of cover letter. It should be simple and short. Generally, the publisher wants to see the story title, the approximate word length, and any publications credits you might have. Here’s the template I use:
Dear Editors,
Please consider my short story [Story Name] for publication at [Publisher Name]. The story is approximately [# of words] words in length. My short fiction has recently appeared in [Market 1], [Market 2], and [Market 3].
Best,
Name (byline)
Address
Email
If you don’t have any publication credits yet, just leave that part off. It’s a perfectly serviceable cover letter without it. For more info on the component parts of this cover letter, check out this post: Back to Basics: The Cover Letter.
6) Know your rights. One thing you should definitely understand before you send your work to a market is what happens if they accept said work. By that I mean what rights they acquire. Many publishers put this information in their guidelines. This article, “Rights: What They Mean and Why They’re Important,” at Writing-World.com by Marg Gilks has good explanations of the rights publishers often look to acquire (and you can find a bunch more with a quick Google search). As a genre author, I think the SFWA (Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America) model contract is another great resource for authors of all types and experience levels. This contract is meant to be fair to both authors and publishers, and I would recommend referring to it when you need to know what is generally considered standard in the industry (and what isn’t).
I’ll also add the websites for the various writer organizations are a great source of info about the industry, and there’s one for just about every genre: HWA (Horror Writers Association), MWA (Mystery Writers of America), RWA (Romance Writers of America), and the aforementioned SFWA (Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America).
Of course, this list doesn’t encompass everything you might need for submissions, but like the contents of any good starter kit, these are things I think you’ll need right away and most often. In the second part of this short series, we’ll get all inspirational and stuff, and I’ll break down what you need for that first acceptance. So check back soon for New Author Starter Kit – Acceptance Prep.
Did I leave anything out of the starter kit? Let me know in the comments.
And the second week of May is in the books. Less progress than I would have liked, but, in all, positive yardage.
Here’s how I did.
The novel I’m currently working on is the fourth I’ve written in the last three years. This one is by far the most challenging, but it’s similar to the others in a lot ways. One of those ways goes like this:
So, yeah, I’m currently in the third stage and beating myself bloody trying to wrap everything up. I’m pretty sure I can do it today, but the finale and epilogue of this book have certainly slowed me down. That’s not really a bad thing. I mean, I do want to stick the landing as well as I can. Still, I’m very much ready to be done with the first draft.
| Date | Day | Words Written |
| 5/7/2018 | Monday | 504 |
| 5/8/2018 | Tuesday | 2031 |
| 5/9/2018 | Wednesday | 0 |
| 5/10/2018 | Thursday | 1082 |
| 5/11/2018 | Friday | 1531 |
| 5/12/2018 | Saturday | 1023 |
| 5/13/2018 | Sunday | 0 |
So another 6,171 words added to the manuscript for a total just north of 91,000. I think I’ve got another 3,000 or so to go, for a grand total for the first draft around 95,000 words.
Not much to report on this front. Most of my creative energies have gone into the novel. I’ve outlined a few ideas for new stories I want to write once the first draft of the novel is done and I can set it aside for a week or so.
What I’d call slightly above average submission volume for the week.
No matter what I’m working on, I try to get at least a few submission out every week. This week I sent submissions #52, #53, and #54 for the year. Still on pace for 100 subs for 2018.
For the first time in a while, I didn’t manage three blog posts, but I hope to get back on track this week.
5/7/18: A Week of Writing: 4/30/18 to 5/6/18
Just the usual here.
5/9/18: Submission Protocol: The Unsolicited Rewrite
This is a subject I’ve never covered on the blog, and it’s kind of an “unwritten” submission guideline. Worth a look if you’re unfamiliar with the term.
The primary goal is to finish the novel, which I hope to do today. The secondary goal is to finish up another project with an approaching (but still comfortably distant) deadline.
This week I’m gonna point you at a novelette I wrote for Privateer Press a while back called “Blood in the Water.” It’s a pretty good introduction to the Iron Kingdoms, the steam-powered fantasy world that serves as the setting for Privateer’s WARMACHINE and HORDES games. You can check it out on Amazon by clicking the cover below.

That was my week. How was yours?
Here’s a scenario for you. You receive a very encouraging personal rejection from a publisher, where the editor says something like, “Hey, good story. We’re going to pass, but we think you might consider improving the story by changing X and revising Y.” If you’re new to the submission grind, you might think if you addressed X and Y and sent the story back to the publisher, you’d have a good chance of an acceptance. Unfortunately, that’s called an unsolicited rewrite, and the majority of publishers won’t consider them.
Though well known to savvy submitters, the “no unsolicited rewrites” policy is often an unwritten submission guideline. New writers may violate this policy because a) no one has told them about it, and b) they’ve only submitted to a few markets who may not mention unsolicited rewrites in their guidelines.
But how do I know most publishers don’t want unsolicited rewrites? Three reasons.
1) First, it’s not an entirely unwritten policy, and some publishers do call it out in their guidelines. When a publisher does mention the policy, it’ll look something like this.
Unsolicited Rewrites: We DO NOT accept unsolicited rewrites of stories that we’ve already rejected. (That is a nearly universal policy among short fiction markets of all genres.)
This is an excellent example, and I really appreciate this pro market looking to help folks new to the biz. The kicker is in parentheses, of course, and as far as I can tell, it is a nearly universal policy.
2) Second, if a publisher wants you to revise a story and resubmit it, they’ll straight up tell you. Basically, they will solicit you for the rewrite. That’s often called a revision request, and it’s fairly common.
3) Finally, I know folks, unaware of this policy, who have sent unsolicited rewrites. What was the result? Nothing dire, just a very polite letter stating the publisher does not accept them. In the most recent case, I think the publisher was aware the policy was not in their guidelines, so being polite, professional humans (most editors fall into this category, by the way), they recognized an innocent mistake and simply informed the author of their policy and invited the author to submit something new.
So, to sum up, when you get good feedback from a publisher, revise the story and send it somewhere else. Send the encouraging publisher something new.
Thoughts on unsolicited rewrites? Know of any publishers that accept or encourage them? Tell me about it in the comments.
Although not as good as March, April was a solid month that featured a little but of everything. Lots of submissions, some rejections, an acceptance, and a few other bits and pieces.
April 2018 Report Card
Thirteen submissions in April, and that’s very good production. It more than keeps me on pace for my goal of one hundred submissions for the year. I’m currently at forty-eight, so almost half-way there with eight months to go.
Ten rejections in on the high side, but I’ve been consistently sending out submissions, so more rejections just comes with that particular territory. Here’s how the rejections break down.
Mostly “good” rejections in April, and I think the stories I have out there are pretty strong and will find a home eventually. Here are some of the highlight rejections for the month.
Highlight Rejection 1: Sent 2/18/2018; Rejected 4/8/2018
Thanks for submitting [story title] but I’m going to pass on it. It’s nicely written and I enjoyed reading it, but overall it didn’t quite win me over, I’m afraid. Best of luck to you placing this one elsewhere, and thanks again for sending it my way. I look forward to seeing your next submission.
This is a higher-tier rejection from one of the premier science fiction markets. This was my first submission to this publisher, and though I would have loved an acceptance, a higher-tier rejection is not too bad right out of the gate. I’ll definitely submit to them again during their next submission window.
Highlight Rejection 2: Sent 3/24/2018; Rejected 4/30/2018
Thank you for sending us [story title]. We appreciate your taking the time to send it in for our consideration. The editors have read the story but feel that it will not be a good fit for our publication. We wish you luck with placing it elsewhere.
Please send something new when we reopen to new submissions.
Another higher-tier rejection from a new market (for me). Again, I will definitely submit here again when they reopen to submissions.
Highlight Rejection 3: Sent 6/24/2017; Rejected 4/30/2018
Thank you again for allowing us to consider your story, but it’s not a match for [anthology title].
Your story made it to the final round. It was ranked among the best of the best. We had thousands of submissions from writers all over the world. Even some of our favorites, like your story, didn’t make it through.
Most of the time we don’t move forward with a story because it’s similar to another story in a different word slot. We’re striving for a diversity of sub-genres, writing styles and plot lines, in addition to stories of different lengths.
So that’s the bad news: Your story wasn’t selected for [anthology title]. The good news is that there will be many more opportunities to submit to [publisher] in the future. Even though your work was not selected, you are a talented writer. We hope you will consider submitting to our future editions.
And the heart-breaker. This is a personal rejection from a horror anthology I submitted to last year. Now, I knew this was going to be a long wait because I checked Duotrope for their last anthology and saw it was taking somewhere in the neighborhood of 250+ days for a response. But they were open to simultaneous submissions, and I submitted a reprint, so, basically, I was fine with the long wait. That said, to wait 310 days and get so close is disappointing, but that’s part of the gig, and I certainly don’t hold that against the publisher (I knew what I was getting into). I do appreciate the very nice rejection letter the editors sent, and I will submit work to their future anthologies.
Thought not the record-breaking month I experienced in March, any month with an acceptance is a good month in my book.
Acceptance 1: Sent 1/18/2018; Accepted 4/22/2018
I am delighted to inform you that we would like to publish your story ’Scare Tactics’ in our Lost Souls Short Story Anthology.
Since I’ve already announced this acceptance pretty much everywhere, I’m fine naming names here. When the Lost Souls anthology is released in September, I’ll let you all know. There is more to this acceptance letter, but it’s just the contract and legal stuff standard with any publication.
Two publications this month, both repeat customers. 🙂
Publication 1: “New Arrivals” in Havok
My story “New Arrivals” was published in the April issue of Havok magazine. This is my second publication with Havok, and you can check out that story and bunch of other great flash pieces by clicking the link below.
Publication 2: “The Food Bank” in The Arcanist
My third publication with The Arcanist, “The Food Bank” is a post-apocalyptic flash piece. You can read the whole thing by clicking the praying mantis below.
And that’s April. How was yours?
On more week of writing, editing, and submitting in the books.
Getting close to done(ish) on at least one big project.
Solid production on the novel for the week, and I passed 80,000 words total. I’m at the climax of the story, and I’m looking at another 10,000 words to wrap up the first draft. I think 90,000 is a solid length for a horror novel, though it’ll likely boil down to 85,000 or so after my first pass and possibly a bit more once my beta readers are done chewing on it. Here’s how the week went.
| Date | Day | Words Written |
| 4/23/2018 | Monday | 2515 |
| 4/24/2018 | Tuesday | 2529 |
| 4/25/2018 | Wednesday | 0 |
| 4/26/2018 | Thursday | 2531 |
| 4/27/2018 | Friday | 0 |
| 4/28/2018 | Saturday | 0 |
| 4/29/2018 | Sunday | 1262 |
That’s another 8,837 words. Again, I’d have liked 10,000, but so close to the end I’m writing slower and taking more time to think certain plot points through. I hope next week’s update will be that I’ve finished the first draft.
Last week I tinkered with a bunch of trunk stories and outlined a sci-fi story, but I didn’t finish anything new. That’ll be apparent in my submission numbers. My focus has been on the novel and a few other projects, so less time for short stories.
Only one submission this week, a trunk story I spruced up and sent out.
Technically, I only received one rejection last week, but I got three this morning, so it feels like a lot more. Anyway, I’ll account for this morning’s rejections in next week’s update. 🙂
I’ve been pretty steady with updating the blog three times a week, and as a result my traffic and followers have increased. Here’s last week’s trio.
4/23/18: A Week of Writing: 4/16/18 to 4/22/18
Pretty self-explanatory, right?
4/25/18: A Day in the Life of a First Draft
One of my goofier posts in a while, I relate what my typical writing day looks like, hour by hour.
4/27/18: Back to Basics: More Cover Letter Components
A follow up to my post about constructing a basic cover letter. This one details some of the additional elements publishers sometimes ask for in a cover letter.
Finish. The. Novel.
This week it’s a story from one of my favorite peddlers of flash fiction, The Molotov Cocktail. The following story, “Masks,” took third place in their FlashFear contest.
And that was my week. How was yours?
As you know, writing requires extreme dedication to the craft, unswerving discipline, and nigh-supernatural resistance to distraction. To shed some light on this magical process, I present a semi-fictionalized account of a single day in in the creation of a first draft.
8:00 a.m.
Okay, at my desk bright an early, got my coffee, and I am ready to start writing!
I should check my email, though. Might be super important stuff in there. Ooh, maybe even an acceptance for one of my short story submissions.
8:30 a.m.
Wow, twenty-seven pieces of junk mail and two rejections. That, uh, sucks.
Okay, shake it off. Gotta get those 2,500 words. If I start now, I’ll finish by like noon, and then I can work on short stories or that novella I was outlining.
Before I start, though, I gotta check social media and see if anything important needs my attention. Should only take a couple of minutes . . .
8:45 a.m.
Okay, posts and tweets liked. News assimilated. NOW it is time to write.
Let me just open the Word document for the novel . . .
You know, I could finish a blog post for Friday, just to get ahead. I mean, I still got plenty of time to knock out that word count.
9:30 a.m.
Right, blog post in the can. Look at me all working ahead and shit. Damn, I’m responsible.
Now let’s write some words!
Hey, someone just commented on my last blog post. I don’t want to be rude. I should check that out and respond.
9:45 a.m.
There we go, a nice response to that question on my blog.
Huh? I wonder how many followers I have now. I should look into that. Oh and then do a spreadsheet breaking down followers and views per month, then by day, and . . .
11:00 a.m.
Well that took longer than I thought, but look at all the super important information I have now. I’ll just save that on my hard drive and never look at it again.
Okay, here we go, words flowing from brain to fingertips. Magic is gonna happen!
12:00 p.m.
Really? I’ve only written 500 words? Fuck. Let me read this . . .
Why on Earth did it take 500 words for the main character to clear his throat and eat a sandwich? Oh, cool, it’s noon. I should eat lunch.
12:30 p.m.
Got food, ready to write again.
Gettin’ into this action scene. Wow, the words are flowing. This is great . . .
Wait. Is it actually possible to rip a person’s arm clean off their body? I’ve seen that in movies an stuff, but I better make sure. Let’s see what the interwebs has to say about it.
1:30 p.m.
Good lord, that injury is way too common! That’s horrible.
Okay, so that many pounds of force, and applied with that leverage, and some stuff . . . Okay, yeah, plausible. Back to the action.
2:00 p.m.
Man, I’ve been making awesome progress. Let me just see how many words I’ve written.
Aw, only 1,100. I need another 1,400 for the day, and I still gotta go the gym and do the dishes.
Ooh, six notifications on Twitter! I probably should check my social media again . . .
3:00 p.m.
Damn it! Why did I watch four fucking YouTube videos on people removing rust from old butcher knives? Get back to work!
Okay, this scene is going pretty good. Got some snappy dialog, the main character is lookin’ cool, and . . .
How can I NOT know how a tow truck works? I mean, seriously. I’ve been towed like a dozen times. Sigh. To the internet.
3:30 p.m.
Why are there so many different types of tow trucks?
Okay, so he hooks up that thing to that thing, and the car goes up, and the scene is done.
I should check my word count again. Gotta be getting’ close now.
Damn, 1,600 words. Maybe I should check Facebook . . .
No! Write!
4:30 p.m.
Well, that is giant plot hole right there.
Must. Not. Panic.
I can fix it if I change this, and that, and this thing. Damn, I better write all this out or I’ll forget.
Okay, hey, that’s not too bad. Crisis averted. Word count total at 2,100.
Home stretch.
5:00 p.m.
Boom! 2,737 words. Finished the chapter and wrote over my goal. Hell yeah.
No, dumb-ass, don’t go back and read what you wrote today. It’ll all read like shit. Wait until tomorrow. You KNOW this!
Document saved, closed, and backed up twice. Now I need a distraction . . .
Oh, cool, look at this guy cleaning rust off a one-hundred-year-old cleaver he found in his backyard.
Of course this is not exactly what my writing day looks like. I also watch a lot of MMA videos. 🙂
Another week gone by, another week of of writing. More positive yardage and some decent progress on projects big and small.
More production this week at a fairly respectable pace. I’m in the meat of the third act, and I’m looking at another 15,000 or so words to finish up this first draft. My best guesstimate is the draft will clock in somewhere just south of 90,000 words. Here’s how I did.
| Date | Day | Words Written |
| 4/16/2018 | Monday | 0 |
| 4/17/2018 | Tuesday | 2557 |
| 4/18/2018 | Wednesday | 2505 |
| 4/19/2018 | Thursday | 0 |
| 4/20/2018 | Friday | 508 |
| 4/21/2018 | Saturday | 1720 |
| 4/22/2018 | Sunday | 1536 |
This all adds up to another 8,826 words of writing. I’d have liked 10,000. Hell, I’d have liked 15,000, but this is what I had in me for the week.
I’m always working on short stories, and as much as I love writing novels, the short stuff scratches a different creative itch. Last week I polished up another couple of trunk stories, though calling them that isn’t quite fair. They’re stories that have been sitting on my hard drive in first-draft form for quite a while. I took them out, dusted them off, and found an angle I liked to complete/polish them. I submitted one (and it was rejected) and the other is back from my beta readers and should go out this week.
Three submission for the week, which brings my total for the month to eleven.
I currently have fifteen submissions under consideration. Still waiting to hear back from a short-listed story, plus one I’ve been waiting on for four months. I also have a story that’s getting close to 300 days pending, and I’m honestly not sure I’ll hear back on that one anytime soon (they just sent a 395-day rejection). The rest are (mostly) in the 20- to 30-day range.
Three more updates on the ol’ blog last week.
4/16/18: A Week of Writing: 4/9/18 to 4/15/18
You guessed it. The week of writing before this one.
4/18/18: 200 Rejections: An Analysis
The meat and potatoes post for the blog. This post takes a look back at the 200-plus rejections I’ve received since I started logging them at Duotrope.
4/20/18: One-Hour Flash – Fuel for the Fire
Another bit of flash fiction written in one hour. Not a bad concept, but a serious case of all premise and not much story.
It’s really all about the novel in the coming weeks, and just about everything else will take a back seat. I’d like to finish that first draft by the middle of next week. I think that’s doable, and I”m hoping for that burst of frenetic energy that often comes when you’re close to finishing a big project. Well, the first major part of a big project anyway.
This week, check out the first story I published with The Arcanist. This one is called “Cowtown,” and it’s a little horror/sci-fi/humor mashup set in my own hometown of Modesto, California.
And that was my week. How was yours?